Homework

The paragraph discussed funding health care to all citizens, and explained why there are so many people today without it. I thought the essay was very persuasive, because the author voice their views on why health care should be provided to everyone and not just limited to a few while still giving you the reasons behind why it’s not. When you look at some of the things the author was stating like; providing more health care funding means they would have to raise more taxes, and even question whether or not that would be a good thing, or just raise more issues. It is very interesting to read because people grow sick every day, and to worry about how people would feel about taxes being raised, rather than focusing on something more important like health care is crazy to me. Therefore the author of the essay raised some good points, with providing us with information on health care coverage to everyone. The government doesn’t think about how stuff likes this effect people who can’t afford it. They only worry about funding for other programs that’s not really a necessity, and exclude the people who need things like medicate, or affordable health insurance to live. Overall, the essay was very persuasive to read, and opened up a lot of questions as to why health coverage is not a priority.

Using the feedback from write point would help in writing a persuasive essay, because it would catch any error’s that were made in the writing, and give you a chance to correct them. Write point is very helpful because sometimes you don’t see every little thing, far as mistakes made in your writings like: grammar, punctuation, wording things according to college rules, and explanations of why you should fix certain things. Sure you have your spell check for grammar and punctuation, but it doesn’t actually fix things like; where you should have a comma, or what words you should have used, and write point helps with that. Also explaining to you why you should change certain...